Wednesday, 22 July 2015

Term 2 Writing Goal Vocabulary

My writing goal was to improve my vocabulary within my writing.
I think I am now at extended abstract for this goal because I can use a wide range of descriptive words and also know where I find my ideas too because I am reading a lot more I have found that it has increased the size of my vocabulary so it is now easier to find more interesting words when I am writing.

Below is an example of my goal the highlighted part is where I have changed the word.

Here it is the most beautiful, magnificent, colourful gumball gun. It has a gingerbread background and the most bright and vibrant gumballs.

1 comment:

  1. Nice job Hannah
    I can see you have extended your vocabulary to make the reader want to read on.